Thursday, 9 August 2012

Cinderella - A Twisted Fairytale

Basically, I've been busy with other writing stuff recently, and so haven't had much time to update this blog, so to keep you good people entertained, I've got a short-story I wrote during my final school year for my English class. The class was tasked with twisting a common, popular fairytale, and this is my end-product. I hope it proves worth reading. I'll try and continue my 'Top 50 Films' list before I leave on holiday again. AS ever, enjoy!




Cinderella left Mawking Manor on July 18th at precisely 5 o’clock of the pm. Of course, Cinderella wasn’t her real name. It was an affectionate title indebted to her by her close friends. She was granted this nickname due to her profession and personality; cleaner for the wealthy members of society, with big hopes and ambitions for her life. She was a daydreamer, and was frequently punished by her employers because of her tendency to escape into fantasy while on the job.

July 18th was no different. While in the downstairs bathroom of the empty manor, she gently stroked her duster along the cold marble surfaces, her heart barely in her task. She had an audition for a soap opera the next day. She dreamed of fame; the echoing clicks of paparazzi cameras following her every move; the toy boys, or hopefully dream husband, trailing in her wake as she gracefully strides up the stairs of her very own manor. Maybe even this one. It would be like that movie Sunset Boulevard, which she vaguely remembers seeing when she was younger.

As she was about to leave, she caught a glimpse of herself in the mirror. Standing perfectly still, she stared. Her stained tracksuit bottoms, crop-top and apron were not particularly enticing, nor was her mussed hair and fading make-up. She screamed dramatically at the figure before her, and then started giggling. Humming optimistically, she locked the manor’s front door and left for the train station.

She returned to her flat in the city centre. It was Friday night, and she was going clubbing with her girlies. After applying her make-up, clambering into her glass heels, and changing into something less comfortable, she then caught herself in the mirror. ‘You’re drop-dead gorgeous’, she thought to herself. ‘You’re going to find your Prince Charming tonight. I can feel it’. She confidently pouted to herself, then left to meet her friends at the train station.

Suzanna and Megan were already there. They exchanged warped screams of joy at the sight of one another, and hugs made awkward by 7 inch heels.   ‘Hey honeys’,’ she declared enthusiastically, ‘how are you? Where we going tonight?’ ‘Megan’s found this great place that does 2 for 1 voddie shots on a Friday. I thought we could give that a go. I know how you like your voddie shots...’ replied Suzanna. There was an eruption of incessant giggling. ‘Just stop me if I have one too many like last time, girlies.’

In the taxi, their conversation turned to more serious matters. ‘Did you hear that John cheated on Emma?’ ‘No?’ ‘I know!’ ‘I always said that he was a dick. I never even knew he had a girlfriend when I went home with him. Though, in my defence, I was very drunk, and he is soooooo hot.’ ‘Megan, I warned you about him. Jesus, I’m like the godmother to you two. I will admit that he is pretty much fairytale-handsome.’ Megan leaned her head, while giggling, on Suzanna’s shoulder; ‘We love having you as our godmother though.’ Cinderella smiled. She asked ‘what’s this club called anyway?’ ‘The Ball.’

They managed to get in with minimum fuss. It was quite dark, an unnatural blue light acting as the only illumination; glass tables were distributed along the walls of the club, with a large dance-floor at its centre. The night was still young at this point, and the girls decided to pass the time by occupying a table and taking advantage of the Vodka Shots Friday Deal. An hour or two later, when the club was reasonably full, the girls, after putting on their less inverted shoes, took to the dance-floor. The club opted for underground drum-and-bass, rather than chart hits, which suited the girls, and Cinderella in particular, perfectly.

Feeling the rhythm circulate their tendons and muscles, they danced, the regular thump-thumps of the bass composing their decadent impulses. The LED lighting began. The song reached its climax; laughing and screaming with every hedonistic impulse, they gazed into each other’s crazed faces every millisecond the club vanished from light to darkness and back. It was at this moment, at the climax, that Cinderella caught a man staring at her. When the song ended, she laughed characteristically, and drew her hair away from her face. She perceptively noticed that he was still looking. She noticed that it was the ‘fairytale-handsome’ John. He looks especially ‘fairytale-handsome’ tonight, she thought to herself. In a schoolgirl gesture, she drew her finger to her mouth in accompaniment to a sly smirk in a half-intoxicated attempt at seduction. This telepathic flirtation continued for a few minutes until Megan became aware of what was happening. ‘Cindy, no. Please don’t.’ ‘What?’ Suzanna inquired. ‘Cindy and John are having eye-sex.’ ‘Oh for God’s sake, Cindy. Please promise me you won’t get mixed up with that?’ ‘Oh come on, it’s nothing.’ ‘Please, Cindy. You’ll only get hurt.’ ‘Fine, if it makes you feel better, I promise. Okay?’ John glanced at her again, and putting down his pint, licked the foam from his lips slowly, and contemplatively.

Megan and Suzanna ventured to the toilet to reapply their make-up. Cinderella checked her phone, changed into her glass heels, and pretended to be busy as John inevitably sat down, grinning. ‘Alright?’ Cinderella returned the grin, ‘yeah.’ ‘Cool, cool. Do you... wanna dance?’ Every word was uttered with a terrible bluntness masquerading as charm. ‘Sure.’ She took John’s offered hand and, together, they danced. Like peacocks attracting a mate, they showed their colours at a distance, but after a few minutes they crept closer together. She became immersed in his deep brown eyes, and she stroked his chest. She turned away and backed into him, his hands clutching her waist as she lifted her own onto his shoulders behind her. His hands moved over her body, grabbing everything, and she let him do so. He started to kiss her neck; she giggled and playfully drew away. He pulled her back and whispered sweet nothings in her ear; ‘you look well fit’. She smiled and grabbed her prince’s hand, dragging him through the crowded room towards the fire exit. She quickly glanced back to her table in time to see Megan shake her head in disbelief. They exited into the alleyway outside.

John immediately began to kiss her and, grabbing everything he could, gently pushed her against the wall opposite the door. Cinderella wallowed in sheer lust and allowed him. She started to slip her hand into his trousers, and drew him closer. John responded in kind, and slowly climbed her thigh with his hand until it was under her mini-skirt, and hard at work removing the final obstacle. She had descended into illusion, and being so enamoured, had no mind to stop him. His eyes told her that she loved him. He stopped suddenly, and drew back; hideous confusion and bewilderment etched on his face, followed by horrified realisation. ‘The Fuck...the fuck...? You’re one of...oh my god. That’s fucking sick. Get...get the fuck away from me. You...you fucking sick fuck.’ ‘Please.’ He grasped onto his arm as he tried to retreat. ‘Please don’t leave, I’ll do anything to you, I’ll...’ Reality hit Cinderella the same moment that John did. He spat on her collapsed body and, shaking his head and murmuring in shock, left the alleyway. Cinderella coughed up blood, and began to cry. She saw her reflection in one of the tops of the glass tables, which had been left outside. The  drop-dead gorgeous girl pitied her. She screamed as she threw one of her glass heels at that condescending figure, shattering the image. She lay in the alleyway, weeping, as a clock-tower somewhere in the city struck for midnight.

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